Brother

by Eloise aged 8

oh brother how new to
oh brother how do you do
annoying, silly
all around, up and down
so loud everyone turns around
oooooooooohhhhhhhhhh brother
so boring he dee -dee all around
oh brother

One Response to “Brother”

  • Roger Stevens

    Hi Eloise. I haven’t put your new poem on because it doesn’t really make sense. I do like your style though. Just give your poems a little more thought. Maybe plan then on paper first? I look forward to seeing the next one.

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