Boats

by Eloise Barrett aged 8

Big boats, little boats,
Boats all shapes and sizes.
Bright boats, dull boats,
Boats with big suprises.
Thick boats, thin boats,
Boats with big sails.
I like every boat,
As long as I get mail!

One Response to “Boats”

  • Roger Stevens

    Hi Eloise. If you write a rhyming poem then you really should try wnd make the last line make sense. Maybe find a different rhyme in line 6? Boats with tall masts? Then you could use slow boats and fast at the end. Or in rain and hail?

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