Birthday Surprises

by Finn aged 11

When’s my birthday?
I want a surprise
I want to know
Please tell me
I want to play
I also want a party
You try and get more presents

Please read
Thank you

One Response to “Birthday Surprises”

  • Isla

    Finn its your sister here your poem is great but why did you put please read thank you people will read your poem because it is great. So don’t think people wont read it because they will.

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