Which poem, Kate? You may have to scroll down to find it. I changed the fourth line a bit on this one so that it worked better, hope that’s okay. Rather than post a poem straight up – I’d write it out on paper first. Then work out if there are any weak lines, or lines you written just because they rhyme but don’t make sense. Then, when you’re really happy with it, post it.
I find it funny that my other poem was there and now it is not
Which poem, Kate? You may have to scroll down to find it. I changed the fourth line a bit on this one so that it worked better, hope that’s okay. Rather than post a poem straight up – I’d write it out on paper first. Then work out if there are any weak lines, or lines you written just because they rhyme but don’t make sense. Then, when you’re really happy with it, post it.
Well thanks for publishing it
well thanks for publishing my poems i will keep sending poems to improve.