Best Friends

by Kate aged 10

There was a girl named Katie,
She had a friend called Bettie,
They were so athletic,
They were just fantastic
They also had a friend called Jessie.

4 Responses to “Best Friends”

  • Roger Stevens

    Which poem, Kate? You may have to scroll down to find it. I changed the fourth line a bit on this one so that it worked better, hope that’s okay. Rather than post a poem straight up – I’d write it out on paper first. Then work out if there are any weak lines, or lines you written just because they rhyme but don’t make sense. Then, when you’re really happy with it, post it.

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  • Kate

    well thanks for publishing my poems i will keep sending poems to improve.

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