Being In Lockdown

by Molly aged 9

Lockdown is soo boring
Overnight all my family is fast asleep EXCEPT ME!!
Cheese pizza, oh I miss it
Kite flying, I miss that too
Down with coronavirus!!
Or else I will SCREAM – AAGGHH!!!
When it is sunny I can’t go to the park
Now hopefully people will listen about staying home

One Response to “Being In Lockdown”

  • mills

    ok, here are my thoughts.

    its soooo emotional, i think you should tone down the emotions like screaming and instead also focus on the story its telling , but overall, i love the first two lines because they are very relateable.

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