My Baby Brother

Posted January 9, 2017 by Fatima aged 7

My brother
My brother
The cutest baby ever
He’s as cute
As a lute
The cutest boy ever

One Response to “My Baby Brother”

  • Roger Stevens

    Hi Fatima. I’ve changed your poem a little bit as it didn’t really make sense. When you’ve written a poem read it through and ask yourself – does this make sense? Then change the bits that don’t quite sound right.

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