Our Amazing Solar System

by Nazia aged 10

I can see the planet Mars,
while I eat some chocolate bars
Up there is the blazing sun,
don’t look at it, it won’t be fun
Did u know that Jupiter has a ring?
You can hear it go ting ting ting
Neptune is colder than cold,
like the icepops that are sold
Mercury is tiny,
like little Mickey
Look at that big rocket
I wish I could put it in my pocket
Some people have lied,
that Uranus doesn’t lean on its side.

2 Responses to “Our Amazing Solar System”

  • kii7yu7yu77u

    Nazia you are a good at this i bet you will grow up writing lots of wonderfull poems and you will be a amazing writer in the future

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