Jarvis was jumping
with his jumping jam
He then saw a cam
and said then, “Oh damn”
After a while
he saw a big pile
so he jumped up upon it
and set out this sonnet
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Jarvis was jumping
with his jumping jam
He then saw a cam
and said then, “Oh damn”
After a while
he saw a big pile
so he jumped up upon it
and set out this sonnet
Hi Jarvis. I like it – but it’s not a sonnet is it?
Hi Roger, I find that this isn’t a sonnet but as a close friends of fellow poet Jarvis Seymour-Jones, I find harsh criticism to a starting poet can be found unkind and cruel perhaps a calmer approach will help him!
Well, I do like it.
Hi Jarvis. I look forward to seeing some more of your poems.