Twinkle Star

by Charlottei aged 10

twinkle twinkle
little star
harry potter with a scar
strawberry jam in a jar
sadly stuck in black tar
i am the russian czar
we have a family car
restaurant and bar
relaxing at the spa
smoking the cigar
listen to the guitar
so twinkle twinkle
little star
how i wonder what you are?

2 Responses to “Twinkle Star”

  • Roger Stevens

    Love the idea of this. But I think it needs to scan properly with two solid beats in each line. Try it again. I also think you need capital letters where appropriate.

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