Snowing

by Ella aged 8

It is snowing
The trees are blowing
I can’t believe it is snowing!
Hot chocolate will be nice
As it is cold as ice
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
THERE’S A LOAD OF MICE

3 Responses to “Snowing”

  • Roger Stevens

    Hi Ella. I took out the lice line. It rhymed, but had nothing to do with the rest of the poem. That’s the thing about rhyming poems. You have to be careful that all the lines make sense and are somehow related to the subject of the poem.

    Reply
The Poetry Zone

Have Your Say! Leave a comment