The Dog

by Lydia Stringer aged 7

Dog, dog, dog
King dog, black dog
Brown dog, grey dog
What about a RAINBOW dog?

2 Responses to “The Dog”

  • Roger Stevens

    Hello Lydia. Has your teacher told you about first drafts? If you write your poem in rough first, then you can say it out loud to see if the rhythm feels good, and add or change the poem so that it is better and makes more sense. When you said this poem out loud the rhythm wasn’t right. So I’ve added another dog for you.

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