We also have to think about those who their fathers didn’t take responsibility rather than believe or lie to the world and kids that all families are usually always bonded and happy .
That’s true. And you should send this powerful poem to “adult” poetry sites. But here’s the challenge. Can you write a poem that is both accessible and positive for children aged 5 and above who visit this site?
Hi Baraka. An excellent poem, but a little too strong for this family site I’m afraid.
We also have to think about those who their fathers didn’t take responsibility rather than believe or lie to the world and kids that all families are usually always bonded and happy .
That’s true. And you should send this powerful poem to “adult” poetry sites. But here’s the challenge. Can you write a poem that is both accessible and positive for children aged 5 and above who visit this site?
I accept the challenge I have a set of poems will be sending them in the course of the week . Thank you for the chance provided to showcase my work.
Fine poem
Thank you