Animal Competition Winner
1..2..3..4.. hear the mighty lion roar,
5..6..7..8.. hear that little rattling snake,
9..10..11..12.. see that little sneaky wolf,
13..14..15..16.. aahhh, that hyena’s being mean.
So that’s the story of the animals
I hope you liked it because
here come a stampede of elephants
aaaaAAAHHHHHHHHH.
We are doing poems again
I LOVE this poem I , was rapping it out with my friend Grace! I was the rapper and Grace was the singer!
Hi sis this is abbie just want to say your poem is good and you’re the best sister in the world.
Hi it is Sabrina from school when Mrs stone told us you had won the poetry zone competition I went on the poetry zone website and read it and it was fantastic well done it was a great poem Sabrina xx.
why didn’t rodger make a coment on a winning poem
This is a fantastic poem so keep it up
Excellent poem. Very clever and very funny, as I told your local paper this morning!
Love love love
Hi Elisha your poem is brilliant x
Hi Elisha that poem is funny and cool!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It helps my brother Jake do his maths only started school
That is a really good poem Elisha it helps my brother Jake do his maths only started school and it’s a
brilliant poem i love it and it’s funny
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wow great poem elisha really like you probably will become a poet when ur older and what a kind comment from abi
Brill poem elisha very proud of you
This is a really god poem 🙂
I nearly have it memorised!
1..2..3..4.. hear the mighty lion roar,
5..6..7..8.. hear that little rattling snake,
9..10..11..12.. see that little sneaky wolf,
13..14..15..16.. aaaaahhhhh, that hyena’s being mean.
I meant to say good not god!
this poem is really good!
no wonder why its a winner.
this is good but some lines rhyme and others don’t
I think that’s mean
I think the rhyming is fine. The last verse doesn’t have to rhyme – because it’s a surprise. Line three – twelve and wolf – isn’t a perfect rhyme but it’s close. The consonants rhyme (the w sound). I’d rather have a close rhyme that makes sense than a perfect rhyme that’s not quite right. It’s a good poem.
Yes that is what I was trying to tell Kira B know wonder this won